My City Is a Person || English

For English, our teacher gives us a slide show of Creative Writing Matrix. In the matrix, the topic I've chosen is My City is a Person. For this task, I need to describe a city as if it were a person. This could be the city I live in, a place I have visited or creation in my imagination.

My City is a Person

Whenever I try to leave 

I always find a reason to stay and live.

You look like a star that is shining in the night

To me, you are beautiful in my sight.

Even if you’re small, you hold me like so cosily.

I don’t need to worry about the cold night because you are like the quilt.

A city that gives me peace like music that gives me chills.

Remember your smell and everything else.

You’re my summer, autumn, winter and even spring.

What am I learning?
I am learning to improve my Creative Writing skills and to explore my ideas by writing a poem.
How does this work show my learning?
This work shows my learning by showing that I understood what I should do.
What am I wondering as a result of this learning?
I am wondering if my poem does make sense.